services pass

Author: MMesch

src/pages/services.tsx

@@ -17,12 +17,11 @@ function ServicesContent() {
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-        <h1>Hire the team that built the tools you depend on.</h1>
-        <p className="page-tagline">Direct access to the upstream maintainers — not a helpdesk.</p>
+        <h1>Hire the team that built the tools you depend on</h1>
+        <p className="page-tagline">Direct access to the upstream maintainers, no intermediaries.</p>
         <p>
-          Bloomberg, AWS, Safran, ESA, and the Gates Foundation work with us because there is
-          no shortcut to deep expertise. Whether you need a support retainer, a custom feature,
-          or a long-term engineering partner — you talk to the people who wrote the code.
+          Major organisations work with us because there is no shortcut to to deep expertise.
+          Whether you need a support retainer, a custom feature, or a long-term engineering partner — you talk to the people who wrote the code.
           No account managers, no escalation queues.
         </p>
         <div style={{ display: "flex", gap: "var(--ifm-spacing-xl)", alignItems: "center", flexWrap: "wrap" }}>
@@ -45,14 +44,14 @@ function ServicesContent() {
       >
         <h2><span className="highlight">Support</span> Retainer</h2>
         <p>
-          A QuantStack support retainer gives you direct access to the upstream maintainers —
-          not a helpdesk. We triage issues, review pull requests, advise on architecture, and
-          take ownership of problems your team cannot solve alone.
+          A QuantStack support retainer gives you direct access to the upstream maintainers.
+          We triage issues, review pull requests or give feedback on feasibility, implement pocs and full features and shepherd them until they are merged.
+          We also advise on your architecture, and take ownership of problems distracting your team.
         </p>
         <p>
-          Our clients include AWS, Bloomberg, Safran, and the European Space Agency. We have
+          Our clients include many of the worlds largest enterprises. We have
           supported financial firms running Jupyter at scale, aerospace engineers building
-          domain-specific extensions, and research institutions deploying open-source
+          domain-specific platforms, and research institutions deploying open-source
           infrastructure for thousands of users.
         </p>
       </SplitSection>
@@ -69,8 +68,7 @@ function ServicesContent() {
       >
         <h2><span className="highlight">Custom</span> Engineering</h2>
         <p>
-          We take on custom engineering projects that push the boundaries of what open-source
-          can do.
+          We take on custom engineering projects that push the boundaries of what open-source can do.
         </p>
         <p>
           Recent examples: JupyterGIS, a collaborative geospatial platform for ESA and research
@@ -95,8 +93,7 @@ function ServicesContent() {
       >
         <h2><span className="highlight">Funded</span> Development</h2>
         <p>
-          Need a specific fix or feature in Mamba, JupyterLab, Arrow, or another project we
-          maintain? We implement it upstream.
+          Need a specific fix or feature in Mamba, JupyterLab, Arrow, or another project we maintain? We implement it upstream.
         </p>
         <p>
           You get the feature. The community maintains it going forward. No fork, no long-term